2012年1月11日 星期三

Three things I learned

     There are a few things I learned in English two as we were editing the stories. The first thing I learned is about number writing. If the number is less than three words, then we should write it in word, for example a hundred; but if the number is more than three word then we can write them as a number, for example 101. This is really interesting and important because if we follow this it will be easier for the readers to read the numbers.
     The second thing I learn is about grammer, and there are two things to it. The first thing is that we need to make sure we are using the same tense inside the story, this is quite obvious but this is a really common mistake that writes will have. The second thing is that well is an adverb and good is an adjective. So well is only use when we are describing a verb or another adverb, for example: she draws well; and good is use as an adjective to describe other noun, for example: he is a good man. This is another common mistake that people will make as they are writing, so it is to effect and affect. Most of the effect is a noun and affect is a verb.
     The third thing I learned is about punctuation, including comma and apostrophe. Comma was invented during Shakespeare time to help the actors to known when to pause in the story, so we should only use comma when the sentence is too long and the reader needs to take a break from reading it, but a period can be use if the sentence is completed. Now for possession apostrophe, we write 's after the noun to express their possesion to something, but if the name ends with a s already, then you don't need to add another 's to show their possesion, all you need is an apostrophe, for example Betty's and Jones'.
     Something else that was brought up during our discussion is this question, "Should the beginning word inside a quotation but after the comma be capitalized?" And we were confused about this, so I did a little research and found out that the answer is yes, you should capitalize the letter after the comma in a quotation mark. Here is one link that demonstrates the basic rules for punctuation:
http://www.northland.cc.mn.us/owl/quotation%20mark%20rules.htm

2012年1月8日 星期日

The Gift of the Magi rewrite

A word of advice, don’t lie. Even though there might be a situation that you think it is necessary to tell some white lies, but still, don’t lie. Why? Because someday it’s going to backfire and leave you battered and humiliated. The feeling is going to be really horrible and I knew it, because that’s what I’m about to go through.
    My story dates back to the beginning of the semester, I was a new student in this class. I’m not normal, in fact I’m different, but not in a good way. When I was eleven, I was in a car accident that made me crippled , my parents still believe this condition is not for life, they think all I need is a good doctor so they’ve been trying their best to find one in the past five years, but they hadnt found the right one yet. I was afraid that I might not blend with the class not because I am crippled, but because I came in the middle of the year. But it wasn’t as I thought, everything was fine, I fit in well and I made a lot of friends. School was fun and I enjoyed it, and it was this time that I met my best friend-Ryan.
     We were pen pal friends every since the beginning of the semester. We wrote a lot to each other and we found out that our characteristic and interests are really alike. The only thing different is that I’m more of a sporty guy and he’s more of a musical guy. You may wonder how can I play sports when I am crippled? Well, I wasn’t born crippled, before the accident happened I was one of the best member in the soccer team! I really love soccer, even though it’s all history now. I really hope that I can just forget about it and go on, but in reality I can’t. So when Ryan asked what’s my hobby I told him my story and my love towards soccer, and it turns out into a lie that I’m still playing soccer and I’m still one of the best player. You may think it’s not a big deal to tell a little lie about yourself to someone you never met and will probably never meet, but you’re wrong, because that’s what it leads me to now.
     After five months of writing letters he suddenly told me that he’s coming to visit me around Christmas! Now what? If he comes he's going to find out that I am crippled and I was just lying to him the whole time! But I can’t just go up to him in a wheelchair and tell him another lie that I broke my leg a few days ago and it will take me one month to recover because it never will and I knew it! I am so troubled right now and I really don’t know what to do. Should I tell him the truth or just leave a message to him and tell him I can’t make it, but how many more lies do I need to tell? I really don’t know, but he’s my best friend and I don’t want to end this friendship. I guess the best way is to tell him the truth and apologizes to him.
     It took me a long time to come up with this decision, which makes it really fast for the day of his visit to come. On that day, I bought a headphone for him because I know he likes to play and listen to music, so he’ll probably forgive me when he receives this gift. We’ve seen each other’s picture quite a few times so we can recognize each other. I’m so nervous, the time has come, five o’clock in front of the park, I look around and I saw him sitting on the beach under the tree, reading a book. I take a deep breath and walk towards him.
     “Hi,” I said. He look at me with amazement. He carefully looks at me and his face express a sign of depression. It seems like he’s trying to say something, but he can’t. I knew I’m going to receive some kind of reaction like that, but I wasn’t quite ready for it. Suddenly, he hands me a well wrapped box and just smiles at me. I took it over and ask, “For me?” He nodded his head, so I opened it. Inside the box is a beautiful soccer shoe with black strips on the side. I’m so touched, although I know I can't do anything with it, and my heart sank after I recognize it. He looked puzzled and he sense the trouble on my face, I really don’t know what should I do, suddenly, I remember I prepared something for him too, so I handed him my present and he received it happily. We smile as he open his gift, but by the moment he see it, he starts to cry. I panic and ask him why, he look up at me with shame and took out a piece of paper and pen. He starts to write something on it and after he finishes he shows me what he wrotes. I am shock as I read it, then I write something back to him, he read it and we both laugh…sarcastically.
It’s ironic, how this story ends. After all, we were both hiding something from each other. He was actually deaf when he was born, he never learned how to play music nor he ever gets to hear it. He always dreams of one day he can sing and listen to the beautiful melody of Chopin and Tchaikovsky, but he never can. I told him my story, which he kind of guesses it when he saw me, but it’s just ironic how it ends. At least we learn something from each other, and how to face the true reality of life without running away from it or just hiding it with lies.

The Bet

By Anton Chekhov
     In The Bet, we see the arguement between a young lawyer and a banker on the topic of capital punishment, either death penalty or imprisonment for life is more immortal. So they have a bet of two million dollars, and if the young lawyer can stay in the jail for fifteen years then he gets the money. This imprisonment is different than compulsory imprisonment given to the criminal, because he gets to read, write, drink wine, smoke and to have a musical instrument, the only think he can't have is the contact with outer world.
     They both have confident in their bet in the beginning, but as time goes on a change took place in both of their heart. The banker saw the perserverance of the young lawyer and he begins to worry, he start to have the feeling of enviousness and angriness inside his heart, for he know that he'll not just loose the bet, he'll always loose everything he own to this young man who can still enjoy life, get married, and mocked him for his success for the rest of his life. So he decide to take a step before the bet ends.
     On the other hand, the young lawyer, after all these years of studying the outer world through books, despise the world and everything that was in it, to the point that he is willing to give up the two million dollars of his dream, the goal that he was striving for the past fifteen years. He wrote a letter and leave it on his table, and the banker read it while he sneak into his room to kill him. After reading the letter, the banker has a heavy feeling inside is heart, he left and weep almost all night.
     The next day the young lawyer left the room before noon and was gone forever, and the banker locked the money and the letter at his home.
The young lawyer and the banker have a bet with each other. During the years inside
the prison, the young lawyer read a lot and learned a lot about life, world, and what's in it.

Question 2 pg. 660
a. The banker's plan to murder the lawyer is a type of situational irony, because it turns out differently that what the character itself and also the reader expected. In the beginning the banker believe that he will win, but towards the very end he realize that he's going to loose the bet, and the readers are likely to think so too. And this is where it's unexpected to both the reader and the character, because the banker knew he's going to loose the two million dollars which is like all of his money to this man that can still enjoy his life, he decided to end the lawyer's life the night before the winning. Which he himself might not expect (the decision) fifteen years ago, and also the reader might not expect so too.
b. The physical description of the lawyer is a type of verbal irony, because in verbal irony the write says one thing and means something quite different. At the end when the banker sneak into the lawyer's room he realize that he was different from before, much more skinner and dreadful. He described him as a half-dead person dreaming of his two million dollar to-be that will be murder in the next few minutes without any sign of violent death. But it was like what he was decribed physical, his heart and body was wary and half-dead, it was different than what the banker thought (happy, exciting, waiting to enjoy life and gamble his money on the exchange...), instead he was really torn with all these things he comprehend as world and lfie in the past 15 years.
The banker sneak into the room and read the letter he wrote.
c. The locking of the lawyer's letter in the safe is a type of dramatic irony, because only the reader knows the truth of the situation, when other character can only judge by what it seems inside the story. Other may think that the end is just simply the young lawyer gave up and walk away from the room, when in reality it is something more and we can see this in his letter. He realized that everything that belongs the world isn't good and he despise it so that's why he decided to give up and leave five minutes before the time fixed. No one will never know this because he's gone forever, no one beside the readers and the character itself.

2011年12月6日 星期二

Life of Pi & Big Fish

Few days ago our class watched a movie call, Big Fish. This movie is talking about a man name Edward and how he loves to tell stories to other people. Many people love his stories, but his son, William, rejects it a lot. William feels like everything his dad says is a lie, and he is just making up stuff and covering the true side of him with fake stories. He shows disfavour to his dad and his stories, and their relationship become really bad. Until one day, he recieves the news of his father's illness, and starting from this day, he begin to see the real stories of his dad which at last help him to understand his dad "truely".

Many things inside the movie line up with  Life of Pi, the character are similar and the events in the movie reminds me of different things that happened in Life of Pi.
So the connect between the character in both stories look like this to me:
Edward = Pi
William = Mr. Okamoto and Mr. Chiba
Big Fish = Richard Parker

Major events that happened:
Spectra = the Island
pond near Spectra = Tree in the island

Some other things that are similar:
-both have color symbolism
-teaches similar lesson: importance of story telling
-leap of faith

Now let's begin with the characters.
Edward inside Big Fish, loves to tell stories, he even tell stories of himself on his son's wedding! Just like Pi, he tells stories, his own stories. Edward's son, William was frustrated about his dad's stories, because he keep on telling it over and over again, and some of the things inside the story seems to be unrealistic and impossible to happen; William doubt his dad's word and he feel like he can't see the true side of his dad. Now Mr. Okamoto and Mr. Chiba are a lot like him, they doubt Pi's word. They think many things inside his stories are unbelievable, although they tried to believe in some part of the story, they still find it difficult. William and the two Japanese men both ask Edward/Pi to tell the "truth", but to them, what they telling is the "truth".
Now, the big fish and Richard Parker, they both play a really important role in the story. Although it seems like Edward/Pi and big fish/Richard Parker are seperate individauls, and that they are both friends and enemy to the each other, but the truth is, to Edward/Pi, big fish/Richard Parker represent a part of them, or IT IS them. We will understand more as we go on.

Next let's see how the events lined up. In the beginning of both stories, we can see how the author introduces the main character to us; their specialty, interest, and characteristic marks. Now in the Big Fish, Edward got into a really weird and unknow town-Spectra, it totally reminds me of the island inside Life of Pi! Both Spectra and the island are unknown and unexpected place for Edward/Pi. They are just there and it looks like a source of happiness and hope for both characters, but there are so many things that cannot be explained inside either places. Spectra is beautiful, the grass are really green and the temperatures are perfect, people don't wear their shoe and they just enjoy life! The island is just floating in the middle of Pacific ocean and it's covered with merkats and algae, there are fish to eat and fresh water to drink, so to Pi, it's his source of life. But as both character spend more time there, they realize that they are blinded by the surface of each place, the happy and hopeful part, so they leave because they know there will be danger if they stay. For Pi, his life will be in danger and for Edward, his time will be delay (you can see from the poet there, he's doing nothing and his time is delayed).

There's another thing that are similar inside both stories. In Big Fish, Edward tells his story about seeing a pond with a naked woman inside and a snake slowly approaching her. It's like the story of Eve when she was inside the garden of Eden, and the serpant, or Satan, slowly approaches her. And in Life of Pi, we see how Pi describes the island, the tree in the middle and also the fruits on the tree. When Pi was looking from below, the fruits on the tree look delicious and beautiful, so he climbed up the tree just to take a closer look of it. When he picked up the fruit, he realizes that it was a little bit different than what it seems like down there. So he examines it and sees that the fruit is actually a bunch of branches surrounding a tooth.
These two stories are like the first and the second parts of the story of Eve. The serpant approached Eve and decieved her with his word, Eve took the fruit and tasted it, and she realized the evilness of the fruit. It is not until Pi really sees it with his own eye the truth about the fruit that he sense the danger of the island. And it is probably the same with Edward, these are the reasons that make them want to leave the place they thought it was nice and comfortable.

There are a couple of color symbolism in the movie. Inside the Big Fish, we see how the people in the town all dress in white and pastel cloth, this symbolize pure, young, good, and clean. In the Life of Pi, we see the color grey which represent the sky and Pi's feeling when he was leaving the island. Grey symbolize trouble, old, sadness, boring, and solid. There's also green which symbolize life and youth inside the life of Pi, but throughout the story, the color orange appears the most.
The life jacket, the whistle that use to tame Richard Parker, Richard Parker, the cat Yann Martel saw when visiting Pi's house, and Orange Juice. Orange symbolizes hope and survival. Pi's whole story is a survival, the life jacket, whistle, and Orange Juice are a emotional support and hope that keep Pi alive. And Richard Parker, is his threat and hope. So we see how color symbolism play a great role inside both stories.

Near the end we see how William in Big Fish, tries to find out the truth about his dad's stories-the stories that he doubt, and he found out that a lot of things are actually true, like he found a letter which proves that his dad actually served at the military before and he also found the girl that he thought his dad has affair with. That lady told William what happened, and William starts to realize the "truth" that he was seeking acutally lines up with his dad's stories. Now in the story of Pi, Mr.Okamoto and Mr. Chiba don't believe in a lot of stuff, especially that a banana floats and the island is full of merkats, but they test and see it for themselves, that a banana actually do floats and they also saw the bones that remain on Pi's boat are similar to what he decribed.

Dry and yeastless
At the end, William and Mr.Okamoto/Mr.Chiba finally decide to take the original version of the story, they chose to believe in the things they first doubt because they understand something about it-the importance of story telling. People loves stories, and that's how it is. In both of the stories, we see story within a story within a story. Pi and Edward are not liars, because each version of the story contain a different kind of truth. One story may be factually true, but it loses in approaching the emotional truth that the other version offers. We can see how Pi and Edward loves stories and disdain dry, yeastless factuality. That's why they told the other version of the story, when the story structure lines up the same but the the theme and the emotion was uplifted, and people loves the stories they told, because this inspire them and extend their imagination to another level of faith. Although many things they said may seem to be unbelievable and it will take you a leap of faith to believe in it, but it's the version that most people enjoyed, the version that motivates their heart and spirit.

Finally, we see how the ends go. William tells his dad's last story to him, with everybody hid dad had mentioned in his stories before, visiting him. Everybody was smiling and they run to the river together. And at last, after his dad returns the ring to his wife, he sinks into the river and turns into the Big Fish. Now in the story of Pi, we see how Pi approaches the coast of Mexico and how Richard Parker jumped out of the boat and left without saying good-bye. Although the stories are kind of different in this case, but actually it represent the same truth. Edward is the Big Fish, and Pi is Richard Parker. They both tells an increadible tale about a humanlike animal, which we found out later that represent themselves. Edward told stories about the fish, his imagination of another side of himself, his enemies but also his friend.
When we see at the end Edward returns the ring to his wife it will remind us in the beginning when he said that the fish can be attracted by nothing except the ring, or the marriage between his wife and himself. But returning the ring doesn't mean he wants to forgot or leave behind this marriage, it is just a way of telling his wife that he'll always be there and she doesn't has to forget him. Then he turns into the fish, what he always were, the stories that were told by him, was told so many times that he become the story, and he will live on in that way, in another sense, he become immortal. And the "real story" make the boundaries between the truth and imagination seems to be less important (when we see the whole story in this persepctive).


Now Pi, on the other hand, has Richard Parker leaving him. They had been spending a total of 227 days on the boat and now he is leaving him without even looking back! And he is just gone, gone forever. But the truth is, Pi is Richard Parker. And the whole story is actually a recast from Pi to help him disavow the truth other people were looking for, it doesn't mean that he is not accepting what had happened as something real, it's just because the truth of the story is too hard for a young boy like him to bare. So he uses the technique of story telling and split the violent, ferocious side of his personality into Richard Parker, his enemy and friend, so he didn't have to face the true and cruel side of the story, after all, he already knew it himself, but sense this is going to be a story that will become a history, why not make it an interesting one? A story that is more amusing but yet it'll not lose its true side. And it is this that motivate Edward and Pi to tell stories that can warm our hearts. So at the end when we see Richard Parker walking away, we know that it's to Pi, a type of release to his violent personality, because he know that he is saved and this side of him will (hopefully) not come out again. Richard Parker is not gone and the story is not gone, it will be preserved in Pi's heart forever and it will continue to be a part of him.

Often time we as human understand a lot about ourself, we have a conscience. And sometimes we will have this thought inside our mind that go against- and to- something, because we can have two thoughts towards each event, the positive and negative part. So this two part of ourselves will be split into two individual, and it will be a tale to us. Edward and Pi just made it into something more interesting, a humanlike animal, their enemy and friend forever, because this is true for all of us. Our own character can be seen as anything according to our own thoughts, just like the fish that Edward saw in the pond. So it is up to us what we want to be and what type of story we want to make our life into so that it will not just be a dry, yeastless facuatlity.

2011年11月27日 星期日

Leap of Faith

Leap of Faith: to believe or accept something unprovable, mostly associated with religious belief

     As we are reading in chapter 92, we see something really creepy-an carnivorous island.
     At first when Pi landed on the island, he was excited and surprised, just like a little kid who found his lost teddy bear. But as he spend more time on the island, he sees the island in another perspective. Often time when we are too close to something we wouldn't be able to see it thorougly, that's why we need to step out a little further to see it. Pi, as he found out how dangerous the island is, he ran away immediately, but the truth about the island is too unbelievable that the two Japanish men who heard it doubt about it. The "truth" they doubt was the truth that scared Pi away, but if I was them, I wouldn't believe in it too. I mean, an island that function by itself with algae that act like food trap and a fresh lake in the middle that connects to the salty ocean? Trees that eat meat and devour every piece of the animal beside its teeth? No living life on it except for...meerkats? Why meerkats? Why not cats or dogs who were more common? This is crazy, I mean I don't completely doubt that there might be an island like that somewhere on the Pacific Ocean floating around and it's not found by the satellite yet! Because this universe is so big and there's only a little thing we understand as human being when there are still so many thing unprovable, just like religion.
     For Pi, this is not a thing to be surprised by, he believe in it completely, is a fact to him because he experiened it. But for people like us who only see it through their stories, is hard to believe in it. Just like religion. There might be historical record on the events that were mentioned in the religious record and was proven true, it doesn't mean you will believe in it. For example when we talk about God's love for men and His mercy to forgive us, it is just stories that we heard. It happened and it may be true, but it's still very unbelievable for someone who just heard about it to believe in it. You need to experience it.
Why not take a brave leap of faith?
     It'll take a leap of faith, a small decision in believing in something may take a great jump for your faith. To say yes or no to a religion will take a great leap, and it's up to you whether to believe it or not. But why not be brave in taking a jump to experience something different and bigger, it might change your life and it might help you to see things in another perspective.

2011年11月23日 星期三

Boat & Island & God


Boat = w/God

Symbolism Alert!!


Boat = with God

Island = without God

Island = w/o God

?????????


     As we are reading through chapter 92 and 93, we realize a fact that after all that had happened, Pi went back to God again. In the very beginning of chapter 92, we see how Pi's boat was getting close to an island, and Pi was really excited about this discovery. He yelled out "My God! My God!" and then fell overboard. He thanks God a lot for bringing him to this island, although it wasn't at what he expected in the beginning. Later on the story went on talking about Pi and Richard Parker's interaction with the island. We learn a lot of creepy and amazing stuff as we read on and we see how each night Pi will go back to the life boat and pray. Then Pi starts to sleep on trees on the island and basically spending all of his time on the island after a few days. But it is the more you spend time with the more you understand about it, Pi realize the danger and the deceptive comfort of this island as he explore more each day. He was so afraid to the point that he sail his lifeboat away with Richard Parker without a hesitation. Then on chapter 93, we see Pi's emotion and his final decision in "turning to God".
     Chapter 93 contains a quote that I really like, "The lower you are, the higher your mind will want to soar." We can see how reluctant Pi is feeling now about surviving; he is weary and loss, it seems he is loosing all his hope. From the end of the previous chapter there is this sentence that say, "The sea was heavy, the sky grey," then at the start of chapter 93 we hear Pi describing his situation "as pointless as the weather." So Pi is like saying his situation is like the color "grey".
     Color has a significant meaning in literature (-by Mr.Webb), and when a color appears in the story, it is like an imply from the author to the reader. And the color grey means boring, decay/decline, and drains physical body. Pi, after describing the weather, connects it to his situation, it is like telling the reader that he's tired and his body is slowly decaying and draining away. But life would not leave him, although he is not expecting any hope to come alone, he still have to live on. And it is at this low point of his life, he turns to God again. His mind is desporate to leave his physical weariness that he turns to a spiritual support. The reality that he has to face in keeping alive is so heavy that he decide to reach for another source of salvation, on faith and on God.
     It is interesting how Pi comes up with this conclusion on the boat, he didn't put his whole focus on this source of life until he went through all these horrific tragedy, but I think it is common to human. It is not until we experienced and found out that "there is really nothing we can do to change", for we to turn to a supernatural power. It is interesting how after Pi turns to God, he landed on a beach in Mexico. Probably the author is trying to emphasis the fact that spiritual support can be surprisingly effective in self-preservation. And it is verly likely that this is the reason that human would want to soar higher in their low point.
     Religion can really play a great role in rescuing human from their misery. And in Pi's story, the boat is like a stable shelter where he experience the importance and true meaning of God and religion.

2011年11月19日 星期六

Do Bananas Float??

In Chapter 99, when Pi tells his story to Mr.Okamoto and Mr. Chiba, they don't believe it AT ALL! And the first "mistake" they pointed out in Pi's story is the fact that bananas don't float:

     Mr. Okamoto: "Mr.Patel, we don't believe your story."
     "Sorry--these cookies are good but they tend to crumble. I'm amazed. Why not?"
     "It doesn't hold up."
     "What do you mean?"
     "Bananas don't float."
     "I'm sorry?"
     "You said the orang-utan came floating on an island of bananas."
     "That's right."
     "Bananas don't float."
     "Yes, they do."
     "They're too heavy."
     "No, they're not. Here, try for yourself. I have two bananas right here."

Do Bananas float? I'm gonna test it myself:


I prepared bananas and
I fill the tub with water.


















So this is the result of Bananas + tub fill with water


     "And?"
     Mr. Chiba: "Are they floating?"
     [Distantly] "They're floating."
     "So, are they floating?"
     [Distantly] "They're floating."
     "What did I tell you?"

Hahaha!
So they are floating, bananas do float!! How about an orang-utan floating on a bunch of bananas?
x a lot
Well, I think it will work, but it'll just take
a lot of bananas.




Result:  Orange Juice floating on Bananas